So first-- hello! Nice to meet you all, I'm Rebecca.
I have a medium-length H/G one-shot posted here, and I would love to hear your thoughts on it. This is not just a plea for reviews, but rather for help/crit/suggestions. As I said, I'm working on another fic and I'm trying to improve my writing.
Harry knew what a hero should be. His aunt Petunia had never sat by his bedside and read him fairy tales as he drifted off to sleep. If his mum had, he didn’t remember it. Hermione had once lectured him on the literary tradition of the warrior hero, and for Christmas that year, he had received two books of fairy tales from her, one Wizard and one Muggle.
He had blushed, and laughed, and then read them from cover to cover behind the velvet hangings of his four-poster bed by wandlight.
He read about Sleeping Beauty and Snow White, revived from endless magical sleep by the kiss of true love. In his mind’s eye, Sleeping Beauty had red hair, and she lay on the floor of a stone cavern. He started to understand, maybe, what Ginny saw in him.
At the end, the princess rode off with the hero on his horse, and they lived happily ever after. Harry felt sick.
He might have brandished his sword and killed the monster and defeated the bad guy, but in his life there was no “happily ever after.” There was no “happily” anywhere, and he still wasn’t sure there would ever be an “ever after.” Not for him, anyway.
If that’s what Ginny wanted from him, she was out of luck.
Thanks in advance for any suggestions!